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I Drew your face on the wall,
Two Cold eyes..
Raised curly lashes..
A Roman nose..
A non-existent upper lip,
Long, slender neck..
.. dripped-dry hair clinging to your face.

The way you stared at me for hours,
            It blew life back in me,
You were all quiet,
         Were you too shy to say you missed me?
Maybe you were too ashamed to look me in the eye,
                  and say that you Love me?

Today, I’ll make you listen,
        Listen to what I say,
I’ll hold your hand and take your breath away.
   I’ll run my fingers through your hair,
        I’ll make all your fears disappear.

I’ll show you the curves in velvet,
         I kept, After you left.
And re-live the moments you promised me,
          When we first met.

I’ll whisper you a story,
                    I wrote to be true,
And take you to the temple
                       where I worshipped you.

And this time
                  you won’t walk away,
Because this is my story,
                            and I make you stay.
My Idea of Happy Ending...
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:iconnoona-2-noona:
noona-2-noona Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
if they happened more often they wouldn't be as special and no one would write such good poems about them
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:iconnoona-2-noona:
noona-2-noona Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
it hurts to know that things like this rarely happen
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:icondwine:
dwine Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008
if they happened more often we wouldnt survive
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:iconsomething44:
something44 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
Powerful words! Simply breathtaking... sorry if I put up the comment a little late. Great job by the way! :thumbsup:
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:iconaneka-svajone:
Aneka-SVAJONE Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008   Writer
Oh m goodness this was beautiful
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:icondwine:
dwine Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
thanks a lot. =) much appreciated
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singsoftlylove Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
This is really goregous. I love your descriptions. Nice work.
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:icondwine:
dwine Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
thanks, much appreciated.
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Blue-Panda-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
man, you have a talent for poems..i really like this one ^^
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XsweetlyXinnocentX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
Wow, it's well written. I love the subject... Imagine if we could write our own ending's to life? It would be wonderful, in a sense...

I can feel your emotions perfectly well, i love it! It's just well written, and amazing! :heart:
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