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Love is only a feeling I’ve been told.
It means the world to me, I hold.
It’s a bubble which floats in Paradise,
It’s a constant high which gives most drugs a surprise

Love is a façade of lust I’ve been told,
Love is the bond of soul-mates, I hold.
It’s a discovery of self in a love-life,
It’s a one way trip to paradise.

Love is madness, I’ve been told.
Sanity is over-rated, I hold.
‘Crazy <--She calls me’ is how I know me now
Winter’s never been warmer like its now

Love is a game of fools they say,
Call me a fool, for now I live to play.
The songs they sing, the music the play,
I never knew it’s meaning, till love came my way.

They say, Love is blind, Love is crazeee,
I say, It opens your eyes to what no one can see,
It’s the rainbow in the sky, it’s dreaming in the day,
It’s the definition of beauty in every way.

Love is a sad story, a tragic ending they say,
I say, lovers are legends, and their stories live till this day.
Everything fades with time they say,
I say, Love is eternity lived in a day.

Love is an illusion; a fantasy they say,
I say, it’s better than reality anyway,
It’s what art worships, it’s what music pray,
If God was a verb, it would be ‘Love’ I say.

Love is only a feeling they say,
I say, It’s a feeling that sweeps most away.
What would you know about feelings I say,
If you ever fall in love, I’d ask you that day.
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Smort Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
My my it seems everyone wants a piece of you Mr Mystery. Quite impressive.
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Jazzjazz001 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. O.o That was beautiful. OMG.
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ChhkzFan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2008
OMG... that is truly beautiful...
Every word of it is golden.
You are a true poet.
Congrats on a beautiful piece!!!
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dwine Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
thanks :bow: means a lot to me :)
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ChhkzFan Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008
no problemo... :3
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eledth Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's beautiful, every single word. :floating:
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dwine Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
thankyou, means a lot to me :bow:
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Maleda Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Amen !!!
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losingisforeveryone Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2008   Writer
that's great!! i understand the feelings, for sure!! =)
it's very well written might i add...it's great! definetly one of my favs. that i have read in a while...keep it up!
wow,.,.,.,it's great! =D
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nuisance15 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
Wow! I really love this! The wording and rhythym and such is exquisite...
I especially love this line: "Everything fades with time they say,
I say, Love is eternity lived in a day."
I really love it! Good job!
:hug:
~M
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2008
:bow: thanks
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4every-fallen-tear Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
ok i pretty much <3 this =]
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
thanks :bow:
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dnmph Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
Beautiful... Took the words right outa my mouth... you certainly deserve to be in the contest.
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008
thanks a lot! :hug:
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thornyroses Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008   Writer
its beautiful!
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Red-Panda-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008
That is an awesome poem!!! I'm in love!!! <3
I agree with Blue-Panda-Chan!!!
Awesome awesome awesome!!! :D
I love the way it says it. It's wonderful!!! :D <3's to you!
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meldickinson Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008  Student Writer
"I say, Love is eternity lived in a day."

i love this line. so much. i thank you for writing such a wonderful piece.
youre writing over all is phenomenal. i cant put into words how much i love it.
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008
i used to write in my personal blog but i think it helps both the writer and the reader to share what love is because often times you dont find words to express the intensity of your love and you get to read them from other people. It's just this amazing quality of love you can never get enough of it, never say enough about it. This is to all romantics out there. Cheers and thanks.
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meldickinson Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008  Student Writer
my problem is blogging too much. but i understand how writing it out instead of just typing it out expresses the thoughts more. at the moment, love isnt being very nice to me, but then again, when is it ever. actually, when it is, its absolutely wonderful and i can never get enough of it. its just weird, way too weird. and youre very welcome :P
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mightybearrr Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Filmographer
i like how it has a told-hold-b-b pattern until the 4th stanza

nah just fuckkn wit ye, same thing happens to me alot :[
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singsoftlylove Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
I'd say its definently amazing. Very pretty.
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melovesnowflake Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
it's all true, you got it! i love how you see love! It's so precious.
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XsweetlyXinnocentX Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
Lol, i love it. As you said I would. I don't know, you just know how to capture my mind.. amazing:)
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doorfromheaven Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
That is absolutely breathtaking...I love the rhyme...the rhythm...it's beautiful. ^^ :heart: Adds more power behind your words. :glomp:
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pink-angel-emma Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
i love this its amazing =D
:hug:
xxxx
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
thanks =) means a lot to me .
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pink-angel-emma Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
no problem :):hug:
xx
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disenchanted-romance Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
awwwww absolutely beautiful, once again!! :heart: must fave!! :+fav:

oh, and your future wife has something to tell you: (lol)
Heidi: the poem is loverly ^_^ lol kimbo here didnt tell me much...but u seem very nice ^_^
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
haha thanks sister in law you are amazing :P
and finally I get to talk to you know who ;) haha
your appreciation means a lot =)
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disenchanted-romance Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
hehe now worries mate ^^
hahah, yes, i thought you might like that :D hahaha
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Blue-Panda-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
aww, that was an awsome poem! i apree with you ^^
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dwine Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
thanks :) i'm glad you liked it
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Blue-Panda-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
your welcome ^___^
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