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There's a world where we're still together,
Where Love's enough for a reason - the only thing that matter,
  The sun keep us shadow and the moon sings us lullaby,
    where days long for love and the night exposes the shy.

There's a world where the seasons are happiness, longing, sex and fun,
The stars are heart-shaped, and the oceans embrace the sun,
there's poetry growing on the trees, its sweet rhyming words blowing in the breeze.

We Live in Cupid's castle in the land of Dove,
Its a place I call heaven, stolen from above
here love is the destiny and every road leads that way,
and if I die, I die in this journey I pray.

There's a place where we're still holding hands,
where your laughter in echoes in mountains, oceans and sands,
  where lovers walk on water and fly to the skies,
   and time's measured in hearbeats and sighs.


I wake up with my arm around you,
  We break the silence without making a sound,
   I wrap myself around you -
And there's an aroma of love all around

Theres a place where everyone knows our story,
where love is worship, love is glory,
the wind guards the soft candle light
and melting in you is a spiritual delight.

A part of me is lost in that world
theres a world which exists in a part of me
I know you miss being a part of this world
just like you miss being a part of me

There's a world where we're still together
A place for just you and I
I named it after you,
ever wonder why they call it paradise?
   of course you would know why?


And then theres a world where we're not together,
where you belong to the past,
I hate this world with a passion,
and every night I wish, this be my last.

There's a world where we'll always be together,
A world where you mean the world to me,
It's a world where I'll spend the rest of my life,
A world where I'll be till eternity.
There's a world where everyone knows my story, and everyone who has read this one knows it too. So welcome to my World.

And her name meant Paradise so that explains one of the stanza.

Also an attempt for the =Flutterings Love poetry contest.
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PoonieFox Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
My hear started to bleed
when i tried to read

<3

Awesome poem <3 It almost made me cry@!
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erilas Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
woah, this is so wonderful...
luckily I don't know this feeling yet,
I live in that world you talk about, in real life and in dreams...
but still, I absolutely love this poem, really great. ^^
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melovesnowflake Featured By Owner May 6, 2008
that pain is so strong...the way you described everything...i feel your sorrow. it seems like we can never really just live in the present...sometimes i live more in the past, it's strange.
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dwine Featured By Owner May 7, 2008
i know, it has become so hard for me to hide it now that the other day a totally random person said i come across as someone who has lost something very precious in life.
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melovesnowflake Featured By Owner May 7, 2008
i am so sorry, i hope you get it back. believe, good things will happen.
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mahvish91 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
man, you have tons of passion in your writing.
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:icondisenchanted-romance:
a powerful and beautiful poem
i must say, reminds me of someone... makes me miss him, but that's the power of poetry for you. lovely. sweet. and sad.
i'm faving it for sure :aww:
great work hon
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dwine Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2008
thanks sweetheart =) yes it is this power of poetry which drives me and your comments which encourage me to express myself
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:icondisenchanted-romance:
anytime dear :aww:
it's so lovely to hear my comments encourage you :) and let me say, right back at ya! yours encourage me heaps as well
keep this up, its' always a pleasure reading your poems
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Nefex Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2008
wow that was incredibly beautiful, I'm sure you'll win the contest :D
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